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In The Well
Det här var faktiskt en engelska uppsats.. Vi skulle skriva om en person, som satt fast i en djup brunn.
Man fick inte använda ett rep eller en stege för att komma upp. Vi skulle skriva om hur personen hade hamnat där, vem som bar skulden till det,anledningen till allt & våran engelska lärare tvingade oss även att skriva den som ett sms eller, alltså. . . i brevform. Å glöm inte att vi minst skulle skriva ca 250 ord !!! Jag var det enda som skrev 507 haha, jag va tydligen även den enda i klassen som skrev nått fantasi-aktigt, min lärare, Lucy, tyckte att den va så bra så som bad om tillåtelse att få läsa den inför alla.
Hon gav mig Mvg på uppsatsen å skrev : Super! , som komentar. Men en sak hon missa (som jag själv inte ens märkte) var att jag har gjort ett enormt mitt-framför-näsan fel i den här berättelsen, Gudars..det är egentligen så uppenbart om man verkligen läser å lyssnar på hela berättelsens handling.
Få se om du kan hitta det? :D Så kom ihåg att komentera, LOVA att komentera om också du hittade det där felet !
Här är den :
" In the well"
Joshua Butler Im stuck, in the same well you fell down to ten years ago.
Do you remember ?
You saw a snake and picked it up to show it to me when you came up.
I closed my eyes, moved my hands over my ears and screamed at you to take it away, and afterwards, when we got home, you asked me if I was afraid of snakes.
I never answered to your question , right?
I will tell you now and no I'm not afraid of, I'm just afraid to see or hear them. You may not understand what I mean when I say that it's because of my "disease."
Its like this, whenever I see or hear a snake, I transforms in to one.
More specific ,a snake of the legends.
We heard about them when we was about five years old, the Silverhorn-snake.
You maybe wonder when it happened to me? It was the last time we played with each other in the forest. When you went mad at me for something I cant remember now, and you ran away , you just ran and ran, didnt even look back. You just left me there, standing all by my self.
When you were gone a snake came, it was white just like the snow in the December mornings. I had herd of them in the legends, but who would know that they actually existed.
The snake suddenly rushed at me and bite me in my arm. I dont know how I got away from there or where I went , I just know from that moment , whenever I see or hear a snake, I transforms.
My brother Steve knows that, and he have used it against me. He placed a snake in my room and then threw me in a bag after I transformed.
He babbled all the way down to the forest ,about how much he always wanted me to disappear and never come back, so that he could be the spoiled cow in the family.
Ive always knew he hated me, but not that much that he would throw me down here.
I guess I was wrong. Brothers, and family cant always be trusted, I think there is too much envy and conflicts in the air between them.
You dont need to think about bringing a ladder, the well is to deep. A rope would not work either because the rocks are to phlegm.
I have an idea how I could come up from this well, but you have to trust me on this.
The only necessary thing to bring with you is a snake. And the will-power to let me bite you in your outstretched arm, dont worry , I wont let any poison drip in to your veins.
So, thats that. Now I hope and wonder if you, Joshua would like to help me up from this goddamned old well?
I'm asking you as a friend. I trust you and hope you trust me.
Words: 507
Written by : Frida.D
Class : 9e
Date : The Second October 2008
Skrivet av Eppelskrutt9, 2009-01-20 23:12
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