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bookj ournal Sorce ress 19- 49 w.10
This has happened...
On the last page in the first book about Mary had the researcher wrote a letter were she asked for more information about Mary.
So after the strange dream that Agnes had have, she decided to write an email to the researcher and tell her about her dream.
The security guard had many times went into Alison Ellmans room to tell her that she really have to leave the building soon because he had to sound the alarm.
But Alison had not listened at him and just asked him for some more minutes.
Alison sat with the paper that she had sat with so many times before.
She had now al the fact she needed to complete a book, but not about Mary.
It hadn´t been a problem at al to find fact about the people that Mary had wrote about in her diary, but the big problem was that Alison hadn´t found a single word about Mary herself.
But Alison had found something that scared her a lot,
al the people who, in one way or another had been mean to Mary had died within a year after the day Mary leaved the town.
Could it be possible that Mary had made a curse over the town before she had left?
Just before Alison should turn of the computer and do like the Security guard had told her she saw that she had got an email.
When she had read throw Agnes mail a few times the hope came back and she answered the email with the question if Agnes wanted to come for a meeting the day after.
The day after Agnes went out from the bus one hour before the meeting should start.
It was a cold spring day, so Agnes decided to go into the Institute/museum and look around a little.
When she came to the room with history stuff from the Indians her thoughts went back to her real home and to her Aunt.
She knew how much Aunt M didn´t like museums and the thing that they took stuff from the people to have in their rooms.
But it doesn´t seem like Agnes had problem with that fact, instead I think she thought it was interesting to look around.
After a while Agnes began to think about the fact that she maybe could help Alison to solve the mystery about Mary, and she been scared.
But just before she should leave the building, a short blond woman knocked her on her shoulder and asked her if she was Agnes.
Agnes followed Alison into her room their Agnes could see al the work that she had done on the Mary project.
After a while Agnes began to tell Alison about the story that she was there to tell.
It was a story that her Aunt had heard from her grandmother, and in some way Agnes knew that it had a connection to the case of Mary...
One night when the people in the Indian tribe had been very sick, a woman had come from nowhere with her two sons.
The woman who was very good with medical had helped al the people who was sick, and it didn´t take many days before everyone was healthy.
Agnes Aunt had also a box in her room that earlier had belong to this woman, and a lot of the stuff who Agnes had found in the box is the same that Mary had describe in her dairy.
When Alison heard about the box she almost sat down on her knees and prayed to Agnes that she have to see it.
Agnes who knew how much her Aunt did´t like museum sad that she should go home and talk to her Aunt and call back to Alison later...
About how Agnes is feeling...
Right now I have the feeling that she is a bit confused.
Of course I can understand her on that part, because it isn´t every day you can se back in the past.
I think also that she not really know if it´s the right thing to go to Alison and tell her about what she knows. Much because the fact that her Aunt doesn´t like museums and everything around it.
But right now I have got the feeling that Agnes do this for Marys´ sake, and that she know that Mary not will leave her alone before she had done what her family is own Mary.
After Alison had got the mail from Agnes...
" Got to set the alarms now, Dr Ellman. Have to hurry you... I could be here all night. So you might as well lock me in..." (28)
With this sentences you can se how much this project means for Alison. That just a little hope can give her the strange to go on, and I think that is good.
Everyone needs a goal to go on with, and even if she has a quit hard goal, I think she will make it in the end.
"Agnes knew before she walked through the door that Aunt M called, so it was no particular surprise to find the light on the answering machine blinking on and off. (48)
With this I get a strange feeling in my body, those this feelings really exist?
Can people like Agnes, her Aunt and Mary really se thinks that we other can´t see, and if that is true, why can´t everyone se it?
I also feel a bit sad for Agnes, just because she doesn´t seems to know have to handle this situation, when she is far away from her relatives and beginning to get the gift who many in her family already have got.
Skrivet av petralundin, 2006-03-06 17:15
Petra!
Your summary is very detailed and you display the current positive trend in your language in it. Your language has become much richer and varied! It is evident that you have worked alot with your English and one sign of that is your enlargened vocabulary...for example:
"But right now I have got the feeling that Agnes do this for Marys´ sake..."
For mary's sake is a very useful phrase.
To improve:
Make the summaries shorter.
Grammar:
"The security guard had many times went into Alison Ellmans room to tell her that she really have..." När du använder har/hade= have/had och sedan ska skriva participformen, i det här fallet "gått" så är det alltid sista formen(participformen)i temat på verbet.
nutid-dåtid(igår)perfekt particip
go- went- gone
/Martin
Skrivet av martinjohansson, 2006-03-08 16:49